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| Feb 08, 2009 9:11 am |
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re: Help With Business Letter Please |
Marilyn Jenett
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Hi Paula,
I've been away for awhile but happened to stop by and see your post. I'm a good letter writer so I would be happy to edit yours here. Try this one on for size :-) This should serve to introduce you AND to invite business.
~ Marilyn
Dear Ms. Smith, (Get the business owner's name and use it)
My name is Paula Horlick and I am the owner of The Vintage Scarf. As you know, scarves are back in style and hugely popular this year, and all of my products are authentic vintage.
I also provide consulting services to customers who request help with any of my scarves or scarf accessories, such as clips and buckles.
In addition to website sales, I coordinate "Scarf Parties," where refreshments are served as I demonstrate on a mannequin the many ways to tie and wear scarves and add accessories. The scarves really sell themselves. The parties can be held at a host's home or business location or even my home!
You can see my work currently on display at the Merle Norman Studios in Bella Vista, or I would be happy to invite you to view the items at my home office.
I would like to discuss the possibility of showcasing my scarves at your business, hosting parties with you, and providing items for drawings. I offer a very generous commission arrangement.
Please call me at 479-876-6429 to set up an appointment at your convenience.
I'd like to add that I was very touched when I received a phone call from a woman who was just diagnosed with cancer. She works in a corporate office and was concerned about still looking stylish after losing her hair.
Please feel free to forward this information to any contacts who would be interested.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Paula M. Horlick
The Vintage Scarf
Vintage Scarves And Accessories
http://www.thevintagescarf.com
Marilyn Jenett
Founder, Feel Free to Prosper Program
http://www.FeelFreetoProsper.com
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